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The Dance

I look their direction,
Hoping to catch a glance,
Without detection,
My first and last chance.

I catch his eyes,
So I turned away,
My stomach turns to butterflies,
Today was not to be the day.

I feel a touch upon my shoulder,
So I turn with a smile,
And I feel my heart stir,
My stomach jumps a mile away.

I look deeply into his eyes,
And wonder if he is truly looking back,
From those eyes as endless as the skies,
Which never seems end in black.

My knees buckle under me,
He catches me by the arms,
And like that he set me free,
To tell him without self-inflicted harm.

My lips form the words,
My mind says this is my only chance,
And as I move like wind with the birds,
He asks me to dance.
©2007-2009 ~Pure-blood-wolf
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:iconerikahla:
That's cute, you described very well how girls feel. well done!
:iconvictoriaharte:
I think you have written this very beautifully, it has such a soft tender feel to it

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I imagine a world where the raindrops
Are tears from the angels crying
Tears falling from joyful laughter
The breeze their gentle sighing
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:iconscias-diashow:
lovely, you a very good poet ^_^ you should post poems more often. Great visual, and every expressive, -cough cough- much better then mine, hehe

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Kill Me Instead!
:iconpure-blood-wolf:
Why thankyou!!

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me...well..it's me...uhh...yeah
:iconpure-blood-wolf:
That is exacty what I was going for, thankyou so much!

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me...well..it's me...uhh...yeah
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:iconpure-blood-wolf:
No....yours is so much better...

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me...well..it's me...uhh...yeah
:iconscias-diashow:
hahaha, yeah sure. I think your better...

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Kill Me Instead!

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